RPG Developmental Editing
You’re writing an adventure module, building a setting, or creating a new system, but you’re stuck. Maybe you’re concerned that you’re not introducing material in the correct order or that you’re providing too much or too little description. I’ll look at your draft and provide overarching feedback on your structure, content, and language, as well as major questions that occur to me as either a player or a GM.
I would also be thrilled to work with you in both a developmental and copyediting capacity if you would like my guidance throughout your writing process.